I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Hesioni, this is Mahana from your class I like how you made your how to make our sentences long task cause now you will know how to make your work longer so it want be short and next time can you add more writing thank you for your great work keep it up and just make your sentences a little bit longer.
Kia Ora Hesioni, I like this post because it shows others how to make there sentences longer and how to add extra.
ReplyDeleteHello Hesioni, this is Mahana from your class I like how you made your how to make our sentences long task cause now you will know how to make your work longer so it want be short and next time can you add more writing thank you for your great work keep it up and just make your sentences a little bit longer.
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Hi Hesione its me Ila and I just wanna to say that I like how you showed us how to make your sentences longer it is nice.
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