I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Hesioni I so enjoyed reading your information report on wolves. You know my son Zameer likes reading about animals and likes to find interesting facts about them. I will ask him to read your information report. It is awesome to see how you have used paragraphs in your information report. Next thing you could work on is clearly setting out your paragraphs and have pictures that clearly show what the paragraph is about. Ka Pai Hesioni! Do blogging in the holidays by doing the summer learning journey activities.
Hi Hesioni
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed reading your information report on wolves. You know my son Zameer likes reading about animals and likes to find interesting facts about them. I will ask him to read your information report.
It is awesome to see how you have used paragraphs in your information report. Next thing you could work on is clearly setting out your paragraphs and have pictures that clearly show what the paragraph is about. Ka Pai Hesioni! Do blogging in the holidays by doing the summer learning journey activities.